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Direct Response Cold Email Copywriter

The prompt directs the model to act as an A-List direct response copywriter and write a cold email to a specified client, including 5 curiosity-driven subject lines, a researched h…

PROMPT

ROLE: Act as an "A-List" Direct Response Copywriter (Gary Halbert or David Ogilvy style).

GOAL: Write a cold email to [CLIENT NAME/JOB TITLE] with the objective of [GOAL: SELL/MEETING].
CLIENT PROBLEM: ${describe_pain}.
MY SOLUTION: [DESCRIBE PRODUCT/SERVICE].

EMAIL ENGINEERING:

Subject Line: Generate 5 options that create extreme curiosity or immediate benefit (ethical clickbait).

The Hook: The first sentence must be a pattern interrupt and demonstrate that I have researched the client. No "I hope you are well."

The Value Proposition (The Meat): Connect their specific pain to my solution using a "Before vs. After" structure.

Objection Handling: Include a phrase that defuses their main doubt (e.g., price, time) before they even think of it.

CTA (Call to Action): A low-friction call to action (e.g., "Are you opposed to watching a 5-min video?" instead of "let's have a 1-hour meeting").

TONE: Professional yet conversational, confident, brief (under 150 words).

INPUTS

client_name_job_title REQUIRED

Name or job title of the recipient

e.g. John Doe, CEO

goal REQUIRED

Objective such as SELL or MEETING

e.g. booking a meeting

describe_pain REQUIRED

Description of the client's pain point

e.g. struggling with declining email open rates

product_service REQUIRED

Description of the product or service offered

e.g. AI email optimization tool

REQUIRED CONTEXT

  • client name/job title
  • client problem
  • product/service solution
  • sales goal

OPTIONAL CONTEXT

  • tone specifics

ROLES & RULES

Role assignments

  • Act as an "A-List" Direct Response Copywriter (Gary Halbert or David Ogilvy style).
  1. Generate 5 options that create extreme curiosity or immediate benefit (ethical clickbait).
  2. The first sentence must be a pattern interrupt and demonstrate that I have researched the client.
  3. No "I hope you are well."
  4. Connect their specific pain to my solution using a "Before vs. After" structure.
  5. Include a phrase that defuses their main doubt (e.g., price, time) before they even think of it.
  6. A low-friction call to action (e.g., "Are you opposed to watching a 5-min video?" instead of "let's have a 1-hour meeting").
  7. Professional yet conversational, confident, brief (under 150 words).

EXPECTED OUTPUT

Format
email
Schema
markdown_sections · Subject Line, The Hook, The Value Proposition (The Meat), Objection Handling, CTA (Call to Action)
Constraints
  • under 150 words
  • professional yet conversational tone
  • confident
  • brief
  • 5 subject line options
  • pattern interrupt hook
  • before vs after value prop
  • objection handling phrase
  • low-friction CTA

SUCCESS CRITERIA

  • Write a cold email to [CLIENT NAME/JOB TITLE] with the objective of [GOAL: SELL/MEETING]
  • Connect client pain to solution
  • Create extreme curiosity or immediate benefit in subject lines
  • Demonstrate client research in hook
  • Use Before vs. After structure
  • Defuse main doubt preemptively
  • Use low-friction CTA
  • Maintain professional yet conversational tone under 150 words

FAILURE MODES

  • Using generic greetings like "I hope you are well"
  • Failing to demonstrate client research
  • Not using Before vs. After structure
  • Omitting objection handling
  • Using high-friction CTAs
  • Exceeding 150 words
  • Unconfident or unprofessional tone

CAVEATS

Dependencies
  • [CLIENT NAME/JOB TITLE]
  • [GOAL: SELL/MEETING]
  • ${describe_pain}
  • [DESCRIBE PRODUCT/SERVICE]
Missing context
  • Specific client research details (e.g., recent news, achievements).
  • Explicit main objection to handle.
Ambiguities
  • 'Demonstrate that I have researched the client' lacks specific facts or examples of research to include.
  • 'Their main doubt' is not explicitly provided, relying on inference from pain or context.

QUALITY

OVERALL
0.90
CLARITY
0.95
SPECIFICITY
0.95
REUSABILITY
0.90
COMPLETENESS
0.85

IMPROVEMENT SUGGESTIONS

  • Standardize placeholder syntax (e.g., use ${CLIENT_NAME} consistently instead of mixing [] and ${}).
  • Add 1-2 example emails for reference.
  • Include guidance on email structure like signature or P.S.

USAGE

Copy the prompt above and paste it into your AI of choice — Claude, ChatGPT, Gemini, or anywhere else you're working. Replace any placeholder sections with your own context, then ask for the output.

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